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Post by supersagig on Sept 27, 2018 19:39:11 GMT
Hey, it´s me, supersagig. In case you don´t know me, i have submitted characters to many stories from the previous forum, and i came recently into this.
So, for starters, i am going go leave you with some poetry to break the ice, and then you can shall share your writing and say how much you think you suck, but you don´t actually (I am the only one who does at writing)
Well, here it goes:
“Papa Lord”
Does a tree fall if no one heard it? Does a death counts if nobody cares about it? Most people just wanna exist I wanna fall through the mist Let the clouds see the truth Let me break out this youth
Oh, oh, papa lord, give me the shinning to break free from this shine Shrine, glass of hell I gave you my love And that’s why you gave me to- Maybe that’s what i wanted too
Good luck, Papa Lord Uh oh, uh oh, uh oh, uh oh Good Luck, Papa Lord
Let me find a reason why Leave me alone in this wild Don’t turn around Just keep walking safe and sound
Don’t try, don’t try to feed me up With your lies They have already gone miles Miles away by now
I have a found a new book Grabbed from upside the hook Processed it right Hugged it tight All through the night
But i am still awake Trying to find a reason why Why should i live with your lies? Why should i still keep these fights? Papa Lord, give me the shinning light To escape this Lonely eternal night
Good luck, Papa Lord (Beat) Good luck, Papa Lord
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Post by Lord_EAA on Sept 27, 2018 22:41:18 GMT
Great Job, again this was a great work. I can seriously hear a chorus singing this .
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Post by anetherealemerald on Dec 28, 2018 23:42:02 GMT
Thought I'd finally contribute something so here's a small haiku for you guys : Artists in refuge; Passion meets community, in our quaint haven.I might try my hand at some more poetry here in the future (I'm kinda protective of writings lol).
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